through the years i've givin love away
my hearts been broken many times
but i cherish the pain
besides i cant leave this regret behind
a life so very few could take
some say im just a fool
but do they really know how i feel?
since a boy i've been feeding off this hate
its the only way to heal these wounds
struggling just to make it
gives me a release from inside
the hard way in everthing i do
so i expect nothing but what i create
use to be content to hide
but you can only bottle so much
barely makin it through
still dont know why
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing poem...so touching. Luved it...Bottling stuff up inside can make this world seem so fake. Tell it how it is, hiding things and such just burries you in a pit of lies from hell. Be true, it makes you worth more and happier. Lets people define you as a strong personality and belief for things...Nice work, made me smile. Although it was sad, your ability to construct such emotion in simple but meaningful words in a short length like that shows that you have amazing talent, along with experience. You are loved, by me. Not something that is able to fall apart any second or has stress in and out. You are loved from me, because I give you my respect. You certainly deserve it.
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Suprised
I'm suprised no one commented you yet, Cool poem!
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