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My place


Lips and skin, flushed
Flaming passion
Red is short lived

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  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    June 28, 2007
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    A very sensual write and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    June 28, 2007
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    This time the color prompt is easy: RED but you cannot use flowers in your poem. Good luck