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Half-Truth

Sitting at the bar next to a to die for brunette
with eyes of chocolate brown.
Politely she was asked to do a favour
rising with a questioning look upon her face.
Gently hands were placed upon her hips
with a twisting gyrated motion.
Puzzled she asked.  "What are you doing?".
Quickly I answered, "I'm scrambling eggs,
I don't mind if I wake up with egg on my face.".
Later the next morning after she left
I realized I didn't even know her name.
When I went into the kitchen to make a cup of coffee
she had left a note on the fridge.
"Seeing since you've already had breakfast
I'll meet you for lunch", signed A Delightful Mess.



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Noah20Tymatal #4
The whole truth is her name was Debbie.

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    October 16, 2008

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    OH PAPA I so needed this reminder and laugh...

    I have missed you hope you are well.


    Delila


  • Swan song gold member
    June 30, 2007
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    That was pretty good I liked that one outastanding story and funny to.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 28, 2007
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    OMG that was funny. LOL Thank you for entering my contest. But you forgot to put your name in the auther notes. I must know who my mystery lunch date is LOL Thanks for the giggle.

    P.S. my eyes are brown LOL