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Song [X-TREMELY PERSONAL. COMMENT IF READ.]

 Be my inspiration

I want to understand your desire

 of lust and complete jealousy

Contempt with the way I am

I want to know who you are

how you feel

pacing

quickly

faster

winding down this road

spinning

turning

twisting

flying

arcross the world

Choose me

as your partner

in crime

Or your bf.

Or your bff.

Or just your ordinary therapist.

I'm just here to help you out.

I want to be where you are now.

To press myself against your lips.

[The song blazes on...]

I want to know if you truly care about

Me.

Let me understand your ways of live.

I want to be your inspiration.

Let me be.

I only write because...

I want to know because...

I want to become because...

I understand because...

(You're my everything.)

(I want to watch out for you.)

(I want your to see me when I get far in life.)

(You understand me.)

Make me your friend.

Your guidance.

[And you think I'M crazy.]

[And I thought YOU'RE crazy.]

We're both crazy, all the same.

Altogether.

We are as one.

 

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  • ShadowedDragonLily
    June 29, 2007

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    Truly deep and poetric, as it shoudl be. I'm not sure if it was labeld "song" because that is what it is supposed t be, or if it is merely a poem, tryin to sing a song of love, to the desired other.

    To me the poem said that you'd do anything, to be with that one special person, willing to die for them. Indeed this is interesting, from the way it is written.

    I can actually feel the need for one person, just by reading this. Excellent job.

    ♠ Chaotic Disaster ♠

  • x x
    June 28, 2007

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    This is interesting, and deep... I really like this. It's soft, and full of desire and need... much like me

    well written, overall