Tieing the blindfold snugly over her eyes.
Snapping the leach around her neck,
I lead her blindly,
trusting my every move.
Pushing her gently down upon silk sheets,
bonding her to the four poster with satin scarves.
That's when the fun begins.
She shivers as she feels the cold steel
of the blade gently press against the nape of her neck,
tracing a thin, scarlet line to her exposed breast,
She squeals with delight as my large, leathery hands
surround her supple, slender throat.
The more pressure I apply excites her;
pulling from her whimpers of carnal delight.
Untying the ropes, I roughly push her to her side
so I can have complete access to her tender flesh.
First I use the palm of my hand,
striking tender curves,
Next comes the leather razor strap.
Red lines appear thin lines across her posterior,
each strike reounding through the room.
She writhes against my sinful delights,
her resistance being put to the test;
She will submit to my tender ministrations.
Standing over her quivering body
I plunge my hand into her silken locks,
dragging her to hands and knees.
I disrobe gracefully,
unsheathing my swollen member.
Into the hollow wetness of her perfectly gaping mouth,
I thrust until I can take no more.
On and on I play this evil game,
until my passions are spent.
Again I replace the restraints,
tighter than before.
Settling in behind her marvelously rounded ass,
and begin the sinister game once more.
My hands roam over her quivering, naked flesh,
tracing her every curve with my lips.
Finding her swollen buds with my tongue,
Teasingly pinching them between my teeth
emitting little squeals of savage delight from her.
Hearing her moan and beg with lust, exciting me;
inducing in me an inferno of desire.
As the game comes to it's apex,
we collapse in blessed desire
to play our evil little game again
tomorrow night.
A contest entry
- Gothic Whore by LilyRose.
900 points, ended July 20, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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WOW. This has defiantly made me hot and bothered. Whoa...if only I could find someone to do that to me.


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Most certainly fits my rules...Very hardcore. Very erotic. Made my heart race! Thanks for the entry
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Oh My
This was certainly a welcome entry, thank you for the read it was spectacular
Best of luck in the contest

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line 2--leash
line 15--tieing
line21--resounding
wow, wonderful poem. I'm just in an "erotica" mood at the moment.
~VoT

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you have not entered what i have asked in your author notes, therefor i am removing this write without reading. I'm sorry but those are the rules.
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Please enter what I asked for in your author notes. I will not read this write until then.
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Sweet Pain
Ahhh yes...the yearning...

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Leash is that what you meant? "leach"
Resounding instead of reounding?
This is truly an interesting game that can be played over and over again ..... hot so hot.

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A brilliant idea for a write, here, and one I was honored to lend my aide to. You keep writing like this, I will have some challenge to top anything like this. Great job.


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