I'm propped up in your arms
Your breaths landing
On my neck.
The fiery gems
Beheld in your eyes
While everything in the background fades away.
Fingers walk up my feet
Going higher till above my ankles.
The other hand caressing my hair.
A tingly sensation surges up my spine
As you lightly kiss my neck.
I wrap my arms around you
And pull you down gradually.
Then, the rain starts to pour
Making both of us wet.
The rain
The sensation
The scent of grass
And you.
I wish this moment
Could stay longer.
A contest entry
- Subtle, Quiet, Intimacy by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 5, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come on, love, cliche or not by Cool.Indifference.
400 points, ended July 15, 2007, 20 entries
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oh how romantic this is! just beautiful. thank you for sharing this. best wishes in the contest! keep writing! God bless you always
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Wonderful
Very romantic and well written. A great poem for the contest. Best of luck.
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Very nice write. When I was young I used to lay on the warm grass to feel the bright warm sun. I was trying to be like a cat.
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Very nicely done and so very romantic..sigh...
Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest; I think this is wonderfully done!!! -
Excellent
Beautiful..Written well..
Betty
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