it's illegal for us to be together
because of one stupid law
you're over 18 and i'm under
i don't understand it at all
if we're not in it for sex
we're in it to find love that's true
why should i be denied this chance
to show my love to you
we can't see each other or hang out
we're probably not permitted to even talk
so for two years more i have to
keep you and your key away from my lock
we may not be permitted to be together now
but the future is fast approaching us
no longer will anyone be able to say anything
no longer, over us, will they fuss
A contest entry
- Forbidden Love by Kodabear.
425 points, ended July 17, 2007, 36 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me REAL by LogansMama.
500 points, ended August 27, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It’s Absolutely True
My fav. stanza
“if we're not in it for sex
we're in it to find love that's true
why should I be denied this chance
to show my love to you”
I agree with you and it’s true
But some people just get this wrong using their dirty mind…
I like it
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Very Good Poem
Good poem congradulation on your win!
"BOO"
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it's illegal for us to be together
because of one stupid law
you're over 18 and i'm under
i don't understand it at all
if we're not in it for sex
we're in it to find love that's true
why should i be denied this chance
to show my love to you
those lines are perfect, i love this poem this is exactly what i was looking for, im glad you entered this in the contest I was hoping people thought of this but sadly none did except you i love it!!! good luck wait you dont need it
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