Don't dive
in electric water
for it burns
beating hearts.
A contest entry
- 10/10/10 Quickie!~Pay It Forward by kiwikrazi37.
300 points, ended June 28, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Different, but though-provoking and subjective. Nicely written and congrats on your bronze.
~Star~
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Hmmm
I liked this
it's different
and true LOL
It's simplicity allows you to take it in different ways. great write! Congrats on the win
japan -
how very very true..
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Congratulations Hun....I missed the IM you sent me, you did a great piece of writing here my lovely
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Awesome work writing this little piece here! Great imagery, and I loved the message. Good luck in the contest
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A good word of caution...beautifully penned in such few words...Good luck!
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I loved this piece, for it spoke to me metaphorically, as well as in many other ways. Keep up the great work and good luck in the contest!
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