Twisted,messed up,bitter bitch
only one to blame,which
is you
only you
well both of you
Hyde and Hyde
on each side
you're pure evil
this cannot be denied
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
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(Jeckll & )Hyde seemed a good discription,when I wrote this very angry poem, after thinking a while,I realized this person didn't actually have a good & bad side,they were simply bad & bad, hence Hide & Hide. Maybe I should of spelt it 'Hyde & Hyde' to make it more obvious ? what do you think? Glad you liked it, thanks,xx
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shelly is this a jealousy poem? or jeckll and hyde , either way its a great read,,it kicks .. love it
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i really like this
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cool,glad you liked it, worried that people would think I am really evil,which I guess I can be a little nasty if I get really angry. but I don't get angry very often.Thanks for positve comment. xx
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