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Bounce Back

Stretch me if you can.
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Bet I'll bounce back again.

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  • Summer Dawn
    June 30, 2007
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    says it all. very creative.


  • angelica silver member
    June 29, 2007

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    I love the way you have positioned the elastic Yvonne.
    Very good.
    Love Joan

  • pozo
    June 29, 2007

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    Great piece. Congrats on the honourable mention. This was a nice hopeful write.
    Thanks for your comment. No, I write a lot because I'm a bit of a 'political writer' (I tell myself anyway, a lot of my topics are political/external) so when there's a lot of political things going on I get inspired (which is good). I wrote one poem yesterday which was personal, and that was hopeful. Everything's fine at the moment.
    Pozo
    Pozo


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 28, 2007
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    Nice,

    All the best,
    thanks for entering here,
    peace...


    -Timothy

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