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Elasticity

Stretch us,
Break her with us,
Sincerely,
Your elastic lies

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  • rhondasail
    July 10, 2007
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    Hmmm...makes me think of a guilty conscience...you know...the little angel on one shoulder and this little snippet spoken by the devil on the left...just my interpretation. Good write...really gives an elasicity(good title) to the subject and gives great play with your word choices. Peace, Rhonda


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    Very Good,

    I like this,
    not the easiest word promt,
    but you've done well.

    Thanks for sharing,
    and all the best to ya!


    -Timothy~