If I could hold your hand
for just one brief moment;
looking deep into your eyes
tranquil thoughts would reveal
seclusions of my soul.
For just one brief moment,
you would understand
the whole of my universe,
what makes it spin.
Looking deep into your eyes,
no words do I need
to utter the beating of my heart.
Tranquil thoughts would reveal
what only time and heaven
already knew.
Seclusions of my soul,
no more,
for paradise awaits,
if I could hold your hand.
Author notes
Perhaps not what you're looking for, but what has played in my muse's mind since you posted the contest!
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A contest entry
- Subtle, Quiet, Intimacy by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 5, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is nice and has a very good flow. -
What a truly beautiful and wonderful piece of poetry; so soft and serene
Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest
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