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Allpoetry Haunts Our Sub-conscience

Portraits of memories
floating in
a distant dream
of paper, ink and Allpoetry.
Poets dream.

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  • XxXAmazed MeXxX
    November 8, 2007
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    intresting... I like it it is short sweet and to the point not really much else to say...


  • My Darkness
    July 3, 2007

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    wow, this is really good, congrats on the bronze.. this speaks for everyone on this site.. great job and good luck!


  • ShelleyA gold member
    June 28, 2007
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    Hi Skky. Congratulations on winning Bronze. Well deserved. Mom

  • ShelleyA gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    Very nice. Lovely metaphor. Very good flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Very good word choice. Nice alliteration and assonance. A clever write. Well done! Mom


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 28, 2007
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    Nice,

    I like what you've penned here,
    all the best in the contest!

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