Scared, nervous, only beneath skin.
Above and beyond, i see your bright wings.
You whisked me away with such beauty and grace,
soft brushes from yours, against my face.
words not be spoken, but felt from the start
I can tell by your face expression.
You love me with all your heart.
I look deep in your eyes as you set me down
You're not leaving, no need to frown.
With a blink of an eye, it begins to rain.
with you i am, totally sane.
The rain, its so soothing, as it runs down my skin.
The sun has vanished, this is where we begin.
As you rush your hand from my neck to my thigh.
You know we just met , so you wont even try.
I'm constantly shaking beneath your touch,
Always pushing you away,
When you concentrate on me to much,
summer faded and time went on,
our time together, has made our hearts grow strong,
and we are confident for our love.
but we cant always see,
what god sees from above.
and as i constantly shake beneath your touch,
you tell me you love me,and just how much.
You stop in mid sentence to tell me this,
& your eyes say it all, as we have our first kiss.
And our lips nearly missed
But what bliss, what bliss..
A contest entry
- Subtle, Quiet, Intimacy by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 5, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope this makes sense to you guys=]
Comments
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Very intense, and I love the way you ended the poem with "But what bliss, what bliss..."
You've captured the moment so beautifully, and the rhythm was like that of a heartbeat. This is just beautiful!
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THANK YOUUU<33
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Awww
Scared, nervous, only beneath skin.
Above and beyond, i see your bright wings.
You whisked me away with such beauty and grace,
soft brushes from yours, against my face.
words not be spoken, but felt from the start
I can tell by your face expression.
You love me with all your heart.
I look deep in your eyes as you set me down
You're not leaving, no need to frown.
With a blink of an eye, it begins to rain.
with you i am, totally sane.
The rain, its so soothing, as it runs down my skin.
The sun has vanished, this is where we begin.
As you rush your hand from my neck to my thigh.
You know we just met , so you wont even try.
I'm constantly shaking beneath your touch,
Always pushing you away,
When you concentrate on me to much,
This is a great poem it shows so much love and heart with true meanin deepness u have such marvelous talent keep up the marvelous work i understand how u feel with this poem its beautiful way to go outstandin poem love theses lines that has been writtin keep da ink flowin
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it turned out better then i thought, but not as good as i wanted it to lol
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Very nicely done; thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest
I wish you well
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