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Hammock Time

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A cool breeze on a hot summer day
relaxing under the shade trees
just you and I in a hammock.

I lean back against your chest
listening to your heartbeat
I'm in heaven within your arms.

No need for worries or cares
you gently rock us back-n-forth
I close my eyes and hear you sigh.

Looking up to see that beautiful smile
of contentment upon the lips that
I so deeply love, and I smile too.

 

Your hand gently cupping my breast

we swing in the hammock for hours

just sipping our Arizona Southern Sweet Tea





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Dedicated to the one I love.

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  • celestial
    June 29, 2007

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    Aww. This was really sweet. "I'm in heaven in your arms". That was a cute little verse. I love the mood you portrayed, and your poem was well-written.


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    Beautiful penning sis, such a delightful feeling of contentment, what more could one wish for on a lovely calm summer day. Absolutely beautiful and so very well written. Good luck in the contest.

    Love ya loaaaaads!

    Shaz xx


    • rainyday woman silver member
      July 9, 2007
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      SIS

      I love you so much my sister from across the sea, thank you for your wonderful comment.

      Cheryl


  • patsoldcat
    June 28, 2007
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    good

    i love az s it great and i would plant trees so we could hang a hammock
    nice


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 28, 2007

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    Does it get any better than this?
    Very sweetly and wonderfully done; thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest; love this!!!!

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