Lying on the bed
no words were spoken,
but the silence said it all.
He placed his hand on her waist,
and a sigh escaped her beautiful lips.
Lips that he wanted to touch,
and to never stop kissing.
He studied her face with a quiet curioustiy
and when she felt his gaze upon her,
she glanced into his deep brown eyes,
eyes that she could melt in,
and she knew instantly,
that even with a world between them,
they would never have to speak,
never have to convey their thoughts
with anything but a glance
or the silence that surrounded them,
for this was the power of their love.
A contest entry
- Subtle, Quiet, Intimacy by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 5, 2007, 15 entries
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i absolutly LOVE this poem. its one of my favorites that you have written. good job sweets!
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Great. I loved how the verses in the poem flowed very well. The words here are beautiful, and I like how you convey this mood. Very well-written -
This touched my heart in more ways than I could begin to convey...
Most awesomely and beautifully written
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest! This is..awesome
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