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Facing realitly

i know I cant change the way things are,
although I sometimes wish I could,
I am learning to deal with whats real,
I cant make my dreams come true,
so I have to move on
without looking back,
no more tears will be shed from these eyes,
it cant be easy.
but its worth the try,
spending day after day
wishing for what i want,
and what I think that I need.
is un-real,
cause I know in reality,
that my dream,
is just a dream
its as simple as that,
i wont come true,
I know that for a fact.
and because I know that
I am learning to deal with what is real
and whats  real is there will never,
be a you and I,
But thats ok.
I can accept that,
haveing you as a friend
is beter than nothing at all,
your one of kind,
your my dream,
and im letting go,
and facing reality,
i wont look back,
I will not cry.
im starting a new life,
with out a tear in my eye.

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  • Alth3a
    January 10, 2008

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    awesome;)

    wow good job i always tell my friend that she shoulod be happy the guy she likes is her friend unlike the guy i like who doesnt notice me! awesome poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
    -XoX-Alth3a


  • XxrockxXxgirlxX
    November 2, 2007

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    too true, sometimes people are butts...I love the attitude in this poem because when a friendship's lost there's not much you can do...better not to cry about it


  • meanderingbear
    June 28, 2007

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    I enjoyed reading your poem although I felt it had hopeless tones to it. It is always good and best to look reality straight in the eye but one should always hold on to dreams as well. without dreams there is little joy in life. Dreams come in all forms and I believe that your most important dreams in life will eventually come true...perhaps not a quickly as you want, but they will happen. If this poem is about lost love than you are better off facing the reality of that and moving on...but in the end you WILL find true love and sometimes what you THINK you want now is not what is best for you but the BEST is yet to come! Smile and go forward!! Hugs, Carolyn