Eternal promises,
dreams brimming in my soul,
death intervened,
a tornado awakened,
wiping my existence.
Author notes
15 words for 'tornado'.
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A contest entry
- Quickie Closes at 11 entries by Tangled Angle.
300 points, ended June 28, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - treasure chest for quickie prewrites by DancingRed.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A potent poem. The images are strong, and come alive within your poem.
I think you meant 'intervened' in the third line.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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Thnaks for pointing that out and also for all your thoughtful comments. Much appreciated.
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Stunning and absolutelu superb! Loved this my friend.
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Creative poem and I enjoyed this one. Thanks for the write and good luck.
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I love 'nature'
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If you would tell me what you like to write about in general perhaps I can give you a prompt that appeals to you.
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please read the contest page...
doesn't anyone read? lol
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