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Loving you but not wanting too.

I can hear you cry,
Even when your so far from me.
I can feel your pain
No matter how far you are.
I wish to go back,
No matter how far i go.




I lied to you,
and for that im sorry.
I needed to leave,
I needed ot run.
I do love you,
And then I really  don't.
But I actually do,
But I don't want too.
I dont make sense,
And then again,
I never said i had too.

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  • Ignis Corpus
    June 28, 2007

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    I do love you,
    And then I really don't.
    But I actually do,
    But I don't want too.
    I love those lines good job on this poem good luck in my contest