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The Sway

Calm winds
blowing whispers
in my ear,
My heart sway with it,
Love, it seeks.

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Lovely comparison between emotions and the natural world.
    Great poem & thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.


  • Tangled Angle
    June 28, 2007
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    Pretty poem and an excellent response to the prompt. Thank you for the entry and good luck.


  • Tangled Angle
    June 28, 2007

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    prompt: enigma's whisper

    do not title your poem this, because of anonymous judging.. if I hav 2 people with the same title it can be quite confusing. lol