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Razorblade or Glass

To which to choose
A jagged piece of glass
Or just the same razorblade.

A sharp end
Where,
I don't choose the wrist.
To many see.

For me I hide.
Right above the back of the knee
That be.

The pain
Feels so good
Relives more stress
Relives the heartbreak.

I have no real heartbreak
I love
He love.
But the pain that I see in
his Eyes,
Makes me cry in pain and heartbreak.

I have to stop
or the one that I love
Shall only vanish.

The pain
No heartbreak
only blood still
drips down my leg
With only the razor I had.
I have to hide.

The heartbreak
will only come true
Why do I hurt the only
love I have ever had.

Depression hurts.
Hurts my heart
Hurts my passion
Hurts my life.

Author notes

i chose option 4

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  • Ademon
    February 18

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    this is really down to earth full emotion and sad and full of hurt and pain and easy for people to relate to!


  • lexie like woah
    July 19, 2007

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    this is a great write i like it because even though ive never cut myself, i kno wat its like 2 feel depressed so this write really hits close to home.


  • Dragon Of Darkness
    June 28, 2007
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    wow so very real