Child's chosen,
collie chaperon,
cuddly, collard chum
Creating copper
castles, 'cross
Californian coastlines
Colliding close
carefully, clutching
calico canine companion
Crying, catastrophic
carcinogen, causing
cancerous cardiovascular changes
Crucial concoction
charitably conferred
conserving childhood comrade
Camping cove
currently, continuously,
containing cute cohorts
Author notes
I fixed it and entered it again. ^_^
I hope you like it now...
It is a sextuple alliterative haynaku, can you do that?
I dunno, it's cool though.
I chose option three, and sorta one.
Konoichiokami
A contest entry
- Everyones Invited, Come in and see! by kelbornro.
1100 points, ended July 16, 2007, 9 entries
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300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 39 entries
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300 points, ended July 7, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PICTURE INSPIRED!! ---> Cute. ---> 1 Day ONLY! by A Murderous Lament.
345 points, ended July 8, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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amazing. ~ hdb.
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Hey thats brilliant, what an amazing use of the alphabet C
Thats so amazing, i luv the flow and the most unique way of writing this poetry!! nice thoughts and a wonderful title to the poem!!! this one is so emotional! u have done a great job, i look forward to read more of yours.
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Spastic...
I give you props for only using words that began with "C" However, as far as a read it was kinda hard to follow for some reason.. I Still liked it. But i think the majority of that is given the fact that no other words were used. Good job
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This is really a fun poem.
I love the alliteration. It makes my mind really work hard.
Nicely done and best of luck in all your contests!
- joanne
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hahaha, I'm sorry, but this was totally confusing! So many words that seemed to be too abstract to make any sense at all...
but I went back and reread it...and reread it once again and now it makes more sense to me. I loved it! -
This is very creative Seems like quite a challenge. GREAT WRITE! Best of luck in the contest. Sorry it's taken me so long.
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Wow, sis. You have quite the C vocabulary. lol, this was very original, and fun to read.
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only k and ch sounds at the beginning
I can make no sense of it -
This was written before today ~
Sorry to have to dismiss reviewing this ~
I wish it was Fresh....I just LOVED the picture ~
PICTURE INSPIRED!! ---> Cute. ---> 1 Day ONLY! by A Murderous Lament. 345 points, ended June 28
Re-read the rules if you ever want to give the POD another try ~
Bear ~
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C's gone wild. Nice write
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How did you figure out all these "C" words? Amazing, I loved the story told here, it was very sweet. I think it is a winner.
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Ahaha.. I got about four lines into it and thought to myself "no way is every word starting with 'c'" lol, and lo and behold, every word started with c. I have to say that I'm immensely impressed by that. I'd have difficult finding enough c words for once stanza, much less the length you have here. Kudos, and many thanks for entering my contest.
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