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Forever.

I will always be holding,

Onto every moment we have.
Cause without you im lost.

With you Ill never come in last.
always first.

Always with you.


you make me feel amazing.
And you keep me true.

So dont change.

Stay the way you are.
cause you're perfect.

especially when you smile.

I love you.


Carmen, your the one.
And im sure you know.

just.

how much i love you.

Know who i want to spend my life with.
And who i want to grow old with.
Who means the world to me.
Who will stick with me.

Make sure you know.

That i love you.
Forever.
and
always.

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  • Forget
    June 28, 2007
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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


  • glued-to
    June 28, 2007

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    such a sweet poem to give to your lover. Take out the like whoah part though, its just trashy and make sure your is you're (correct form) otherwise a good love poem. good write.