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Ladybugs

You don't have to be plastered
to spill your soul.
You don't have to get high
and break your parole.

We talk on the phone
at all hours of day
and whisper at night.
We've so much to say.

Car rides and storms
sprinkled with smiles
ladybugs that linger
movie show aisles

My summer to live,
to learn, and to grow.
With you as my gardener
and so much to show.


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  • glued-to
    June 28, 2007
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    this is a really interesting write. the way you auluded gardening and ladybugs to your situation was just simply clever. a quite cute poem with harsh and deep thrust in makes it a good balance. I think the rhyming is a teensy bit forced but thats just my opinion.

  • emLeejo
    June 28, 2007

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    Ohohohoh (im saying the K word (K I n K Y) lol only because i know the story behind this sorta.. lol.. but this was an amazing write. you always have such a way with words.. makes me sad. wishing i could write like you. but this was literally awesome. now just send it to him and bam! lol man i wish i could write one about my "lover" haha oh or about his friend haha *giggles* lol wow.. but loverly write loverly! take care~ luvs you!