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~♥~to Far Gone~♥~

You called her names to cut her down to size.
Now she’s running because she wants to be free.
Don’t try to call her back.
She’s too far gone to hear you.
You taught her not to trust.
She’s running scared.
She’s too far gone to care what you say.
You, her own father has caused this pain.
Too far gone in her own thoughts to realize the pain as she slits the vein.
You scream for help but she is too far gone to be brought back to life.
Too far gone to care what you say.
Too far gone to care what you think.
Curse all you want.
Call her stupid all you want.
She’s too far gone to care what you think, say, or do.

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  • Madison Mary
    June 28, 2007
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    Such a sad write, but so beautiful and powerful. I do hope things get better for you...