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~♥~a Good-Bye Note~♥~

For the family I loved
that never loved back
that broke my heart
And turned my dreams black
You brought me up
and watched me fall
and kicked me down
when I was already on the floor
its all to late
its mainly your fault
that I’m sitting here writing this,
This suicide note.
To my sibling
Who I’ve always held close
my little beam
of shining hope…
The joy you brought me
the pain you took
the I love you s you said
The way you look
I’m sorry to leave you here on your own
just remember your heart was my home…
To my friends…
Who cared the most
the hugs yew gave me
the smiles and hopes
Whenever I need you
just a phone call away
the tears I cried you brushed away
I leave you…but it isn’t you fault
If anything you gave me,
you gave me hope…
I’m going to leave…
leave you behind
One less friend to keep in mind
To the one I love
who was always there
Your mesmerizing eyes
Your dark hair…
The way I felt
when you held me close…
Sharing my pain
Giving me hope…
The laughs we share
The smiles and jokes.
I’ll always love you
and I'll miss you most…
I’m sitting here…
On the floor
with a knife in my hand,
I’ve locked the door…
Ending my life
ending my pain
"Resting in peace"
My claim to fame
The life I’ve lived
the pain I’ve felt…
A long windy road
of wonder and doubt
The judging looks
The harmful words said
there’s no point living
when inside I’m dead
I leave you now
forever, For good
I've live my hell
I've tried to do good
I've lived my life...
I've left my mark
I've lived my life
In a the dark
I bid farewell
as a blade stabs my heart
Good–bye, Good-bye
Death did us part.

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  • honey bear silver member
    July 16, 2007

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    an amazing write and although i do not, not, not like suicide or self harming poetry, i do have to stand back and congratulate you on an exelent write


  • Immer Leben
    June 28, 2007

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    I am totally blown away. Line 55 is amazing. And line 66 to 75 is wonderfully written. I'm amazed. I applaud you in so many ways. Even though the rhyming scheme is a bit...off, this is still an excellent write. ^.^ Great job.





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