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Don't mess with me

you get on my nerves
i know a good purpose is what you serve
Buti'll tell you one thing that  even you know is true
its in what you say not what you do

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This is about one of my family members and its not my sibling its someone else who acts like they are a kid but is meerly an adult

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  • Immer Leben
    June 28, 2007

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    Hmm...I have to say that I have a member in my family who is 23 years old, but acts like a little spoiled child.
    The rhymes are used nicely, and I like the 2nd and 4th lines. ^.^ Good write. Simple, short, but it has a loud message.



    ~S~