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Cleansing Rains

Cleanse me in a deluge.
Wrapped in heaven's tears
To fall upon my naked soul-
rain down on me tonight!

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    Wow,

    You sure do have some skill, I just enjoy reading the way you word things in these quickie contests. All the best, peace, Timothy


  • Heavenly Angel
    June 27, 2007

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    Let it rain, let it rain, let it rain !
    Very well done
    Very nice write in such few words; thank you so much for sharing! I wish you the best!!!