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Broken Lies

Cowering in a corner
Afraid for her life
A girl huddles in the darkness
Hiding from those eyes

Screaming and shouting
Hiding and crying
Holding her tounge
Clentching her fists

Leave me alone!
I can't take the pain!
I don't want to live in fear!
I want to trust people!

Let me go!
You Bastard!
Let me go!
I don't want to get hit again!
I never did a damn thing wrong!

The booze screwed you in the head!
Those people who hurt you
They should be getting this beating!

What did I do?
Nothing!
Nothing!
I never do anything wrong!

I can't change your childhood!
It isn't my fault they beat you!
It's not yours either!
No one can fix you but you!

Please!
Just let me go!
Let him go!
He did nothing!
Please let him go!

I'll take his beating!
Just don't hurt him!
Never hurt him!
YOU CAN'T HURT HIM!!

Screaming and shouting
Bruises and blisters
Pain in so many ways
I can't even think straight

Please
Just
Let
Us
Go

Author notes

Xgeekdreamsgonewrong
If you know me well, you know who it is about.
It's kinda all about corupt lives and anger and hate.
Most of my inspiration comes when I listen to music..I was listening to Evanescence when this one came to me.
Amy Lee is like my number one muse.

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    awww Im so sorry what you and your brother have been through...I Love you and will always be there for you! this piece was good it was really strong.

    -Steve-