Crossing brides
bridge of dreams,
confetti dress celebration,
whispering swirls.
In a list
A contest entry
- Blessed with a Win: 10x10x10 ~ Pay It Forward by PerfectImperfection.
525 points, ended June 27, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - treasure chest for quickie prewrites by DancingRed.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friends welcome by Riftkin.
500 points, ended June 8, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is great and the few
words used in this
speaks out and paints
the picture that
one can see
Thank you for entering it
Riftkin
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Beautiful images. The scene you describe really comes to life when read.
I like the fact each word is needed; you haven't filled the piece up with anything unnecessary.
Great poem & thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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Congratulations on the gold HH you have such a beautiful mind behind the thoughts you present for us to read the imagery and expressive descriptive emotion just paint such artistic pictures in words....you are really getting these quick contests under your belt a pleasure to read and at times frustrating yeah i want more but then that is the beauty and pleasure of the short poem. brilliantly penned
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Wow, what a wonderful job you've done on this one hun, you are beomcing quite the master of these quick writes, I love the imagery in this one and the thoughts it leaves you with when all you want is for it to keep going.... ponder I shall
Karen
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gratz on gold. great one!
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Great imagery here, fits wonderfully to capture the picture; but could stand all on it's own. Thank you so much for your entry!
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