Jealousy Justice?
Anger Attempt to stop violence?
Ignorance Innocent till proven guilty?
Lies Lies and more lies is the answer.
Author notes
Option 5- Five Lines or Less
A contest entry
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Comments
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An interesting and very realistic approach to the subject. Nicely done, I like the format, though [maybe it's my screen] it looks a little sloppy on my end.
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Short but truthful. Thank you for entering my contest =]
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Point well taken
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I'm not sure what your phobia is, or really what you're afraid of at all.
But... this certainly is an original peice. Though provoking.
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Please remember, though, as stated in the rules, you must edit your author's notes to include the option number before I can include you in judging.
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I'm not a huge fan of acrostics, but this is one of the best I've seen. I like the split of the letters and the contrasting views that you present. I also love that you were able to address a very important issue in current society. Thank you for entering.
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i see you are writing another deep acrostic love this was a great topic to pick write here i must add
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GREAT!
This is a very well done piece you have written. Sometimes it does feel like our justice system is full of lies. Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck, Mysty Rain -
A clever acrostic. Well conceived and well written. Excellent work!
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