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Disappearance

Again I'm leaving
for just a short time.
But how can I leave
If I'm not really here?

I'm going away,
leaving my mind.
Its scary to think
because its all so unclear.

I wish I were dead.
I know I'm one of a kind.
Except for Megan,
They can all disappear.

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Written August 16th, 2003

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  • Schwarzes
    August 29, 2003
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    i like it, it almost kinda sounds like something i would right, i really like the lines

    But how can I leave
    If I'm not really here?

    going out of your mind, when you were never really in your right mind. great write.


  • Night Eye
    August 16, 2003
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    "Except for Megain" hum thats the only line that I do not understand. the rest of it is great though! I like to jest that I was never sane and this really explains insanetydeprestion. when things become "so unclear" you tend to ignore them.
    great write hun
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    Johnathan