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Party of the Dead

Red lights are glaring
Death music blaring
The dead are dancing
Necrophiliac's romancing

The danse macabre
A skeleton's job
To entertain
The monsters of pain

The Grim Reaper
Slips his tongue deeper
And makes her sigh,
Makes her dry

Demons drink the sacrifice
Baby's blood over dry ice
Blind is the sound, deaf is the mood
To the walls the mass is tattooed

Gothic erotica
Satanic springs of wicca
Guns and knives
Men kill wives

Fallen angels scream
About how they used to dream;
The Devil's eating Hitler's heart
And watches the newest souls depart

The party rages on
Never ceasing at dawn
Sexual desires
At the hands of the suppliers

Tragically kinky
Beautifully filthy
Just the way he likes it
And she never told him to quit

Bloody walls on bathroom stalls
The way they acts most likely appalls
Torture and vandalism
Lies and scandals trapped in a prism

The ritual continues
As the children are abused
The music is set
To a noise no one could forget

The screams of crucified saviors
Lacerations due to their behaviors
True words, Hell's escapades are hearty
And, trust me, there's nothing like watching the dead party.

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  • kelseafelix
    August 1, 2008
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    lov it


  • Mary Alice
    August 15, 2007
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    AWESOMENESS

    good job mommy!

  • Acidanthra
    August 2, 2007
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    Thank you for joining this contest... I will be judging here shortly... :)


  • DevinCora
    July 24, 2007

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    Amazing

    This poem really did it for me... I love it... it seems like something you would write... it is a masterpiece!!!!


  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    June 28, 2007

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    WHOA! YAY!

    I LOVE THIS! YAY ONCE AGAIN! Just,.......ASTOUNDING! All the imagery and nice choice in words. The whole piece is amazing, you know, i love reading poetry like this. I really do......it makes me happy in a twisted kind of way!!haha


  • Werewolf Avarus
    June 28, 2007

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    Wow this is an awesomeness write! i had to read it twice, lol. great job and wish you like in the contest.
    'wolf


  • vampireblood
    June 27, 2007

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    I really like this piece. It's different from alot of stuff I have read on AP, and I love that fact. Its unique. Your piece had some good, and intersting imagery. I am going to put you in the prelims for sure =]. Nice job, and thank you for entering my contest, best of luck to you
    ~~~Vampy~~~

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