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Kirk"s Angel

I have a friend,
he's almost dead.
I've known him for a week or so,
but he doesn't treat me like a ho.
He shows respect and honesty.
And for that, i wonder,
why not me?
Why does the Lord
want him now?
He's so young,
so unexplored.
I thought about this
long and hard.
The answer is,
he's God's angel.
Because the Lord giveth,
and the Lord taketh away.
BLESSED BE THY NAME OF THY LORD!!

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Written August 16th, 2003

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  • Schwarzes
    August 29, 2003
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    i like it, it kinda reminds me of my own life, it seems like as soon as we meet some one that we think is our soul mate, or just some one who treats us better than anyone we know, theyre gone out of our life in one way or another, as soon as we meet them. great write.