Close you eyes and fall asleep,
I'll whisper in your ear and tell you everything's alright.
Dream of happiness within you & I-
as we watch the gray clouds fall from the sky...
we'll dance under the starry night
while children burn to ashes underneath us.
It's just another special moment-
together, we walk on the beach,
sand grains getting caught inside our toe nails
Your soft, brown hair will echo through the wind,
and I will try to decipher your beauty
through those shades...
My voice can kill a thousand butterflies-
but it's all for your pleasure, darling.
as ludacris as it sounds;
just listen to me speak,
and you will fall asleep...
Author notes
hm. i was thinking more of an audrey h. meets the devil
eh. not my best,
The stars are out tonight
A contest entry
- [Infidelilty] Inspirational. by They Say Shannon.
600 points, ended July 2, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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By the way.... You apparently didn't read the rules? :/
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i apologize for that!! i read everything on there like three times [since this is an interesting contest! not trying to suck up]- but i missed that spot! i'm so sorry.
but thanks for telling me...
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Haha, it's okay.
<3
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"while children burn to ashes underneath us."
Oh my... That's scary
Haha, Nice writing though; I understand the images.
"My voice can kill a thousand butterflies-
but it's all for your pleasure, darling."
ooh, Nice.
I get a feel of emotion from this one;
Great job,
Thanks for entering and good luck! <3
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