Smiles of Sunshine
Summer
The park is full of people
Walking , running, singing
The eternity of a day in the park
We walk and talk
We remember a time of before
Young love of our youth
Sweet as the taste of vermouth
This is the place we first kissed
The place we pledged our hearts
The first time I saw that smile
The perfect look with downcast eyes
Innocent of any lies,
A blush in your cheek
Young maiden’s bloom
Eyes that sparkled
Like morning dew
All of this I remember still
And you never lost that
Wonderful smile.
Author notes
a wonderful day to go to the park
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what a wonderful job, sweet heart. I think you did such an amazing job with a lot of great lines.
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You have some fabulous lines woven throughout this piece bringing it together and making it an excellent penning
Great work ~Tia
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You know, you truly are a romantic (I don't care what anybody says) - your poems always come from the heart and I'm not even sure whether they come from experience or not!!!
"The perfect look with downcast eyes
Innocent of any lies,"
Loved em!
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so simple, so adoring, so much in love, can you tell I'm partial to love poems.....very nice
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oh- the last line! this is a visual journey! wonderfully written! beautiful words for a beautiful season!
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A very lovely day at the park...such a sweet and nice poem with precious memories of someone so special. Imagery was so bright and wonderfully expressed. Thanks for sharing you blessings.
Love,
Az
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I like the word journey within your poems. I feel as if I am partaking in part of your life. A loving atmoshpere is found within this poem.
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This is a very beautiful piece, it passes my "close your eyes" test. What is that you ask, well If I can close my eyes and see the piece unfold it is a fantabulous write. I most certainly can close my eyes and see this happening and feel the warm breeze on my face. Perfact job on this piece. I love it.
Cheryl
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