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Why is it so hard
for me to resist,
your every motion,
and the feel of your kiss?

I'm in love with you now.
I was in love with you then,
Even though you messed around,
with someone I thought was my friend.

you stole my heart,
she stole my pants.
I still want you back
just let me out of this trance.

I think about,
when we first met.
It seems our very first kiss,
is one I'll soon not forget.

Its always so hard,
to say goodbye,
but I have no way
to justify
all the wrong that I did
to you and I'm sorry
so I'll leave you with this
I promise you
you'll always be missed.

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Written August 16th, 2003

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  • Schwarzes
    August 29, 2003
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    if this is about what i think its about, im really sorry, no girl should have to go through that, great emotion and feeling.


  • poisonsilver
    August 16, 2003
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    tis is a really great poem... i loved it... i'm sorry this happened tho it's very sad & i hope u r better soon

  • another nobody
    August 16, 2003
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    aww, this is such a sad poem its seems thta you both hurt each other at one point in your relationship with eachother, i think im going through the same thing at the moment but we aint even started seeing each other yet, so god knows how bad its gonna be if we do, anywas its sounds as if you still like them very much, just remember if somethings not ment to be its not ment to be, sry of this makes no sence im just a bit drunk at the moment

    *emma*
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