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..You..

.Y.es ,my world is finally complete
the challenges of life,i can now defeat
i now have someone great to live for ,
someone who will make me cry no more
someone i wake everymorning to see
and be sure that this guy's in love with me..

someone my blood continues to flow for
my heart continues to beat for
my lungs continue to work for..


.O.nly when someone as special and worthy,
walked into my life,did i feel like i lived
for someone other than me,
i now have sunny days and starry nights ,
and everything around me just feel so right..

my tasks are easier,
foods are tastier,
life is sweeter..

.U.nder the influence of my love for you
i'll do anything you want me to
i've become childlike,vulnerable,
but its ok ,cuz you're soo loverble
my entire being is open before you,
no one else affects me the way you do..


my soul is now filled with joy,
my heart is no longer a toy,
i hope you can see how much i love you boy..

 





copyright..mrs d..all rights reserved

Author notes

this poem is inspired by my one true love ...love you boo!!

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  • happy-lil-artemis
    December 8, 2008
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    good job and good luck

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    December 8, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful write, Josie


    • Mrs D
      December 8, 2008
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      you're most welcome...and thanks for the contest


  • Wind Walker
    July 23, 2007

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    Aaaaaa Love

    Love starts inside and expands out
    but the real secret to it is
    you can love more then one -
    each one will be different
    and none takes away from the other
    that's why life is so complicated,
    you think I jest ?
    you love both parents -
    this is where it starts
    B D


  • myorama
    July 10, 2007
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    Wonderful

    I really loved the way you wrote this. Very creative.


  • Jiyo
    June 28, 2007
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    lol loverble, foods are tastier, whats not to like about this guy

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