duck dodge turn jump
S w I n G
another dangerous
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stampeed, yelps, rumbles
arrows narrowly scraping sideburns
duck dodge turn jump wrestle!
tuck - roll, hide
if they see my eyes glowing through
these shrubs it's over!
RRRRRRRRRiiiingggggggg ........
RRRRRRRRRiiiingggggggg .............
ugh, i always hate it when my books
get interrupted by the phone
mainly because it means i have to get
out of the bath
Author notes
yes reading in the tub causes more wet books and unpaid library dues....
A contest entry
- I am coming back by elemental angel.
1000 points, ended July 2, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
quicky while on lunch break
Comments
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Great Poem
Great Poem ,it made me laugh.
I love the sound effects, and your visual layout of the words in the poem. You were so descriptive, I could see it like a movie on the screen of my mind. Made me want to take a bubble bath, with a good book.
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Wonderful expression Thank you so much for entering and good luck in my contest.
Bravo
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This is to funny great work I love the ending!
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