note to self
not to
note to self
note to self
note to note to
self
He's in love with someone else
tried your hardest
don't regret
I'm sure one day
eventually
he'll remember you
he won't forget
HE underestimates you
pushes you aside
makes up things
to say bad about you
you have no need
to cry
DOn't wait for him
don't wait for him
dont
dont
dont
he'll just continue to take
and you
....
you don't need him
telling you
how awful you really are
you don't need him
don't need him
or another scar
note to self
not
not to
self
A contest entry
- Do what you want! by OnyxtheForsaken.
450 points, ended July 5, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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Hmm... Interesting. Although I can relate to the sentiment and thought that has been used in your style. Especially the "note to self" verses. An emotional piece, very well done. Good luck in the contest
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sad
sad is love , but use it to inspire your poetry..
love is a sad thing, but its better to have loved than never try......remember Romeo and Juliet..write something modern ..let's say your a Juliet and somewhere there's a Romeo....think castles in your neighbourhood, and cool caracters...
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