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Beyond Infinity

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Beyond Infinity

Welcome to my world, take my hand and see.
Come into my world, a world of mystery.  
It’s a magical place where dark meets light,
shadow shades of grey, fading into night.

A world where everyone speaks in rhyme,
with laughing and dancing and bending time.
The place where dreams, become reality
and our children rule with a majesty.

Come into my world of tranquility,
where we warp time and stability.
So open your mind as you fantasize
and step in the mirror before your eyes.

A place where laughter is the only rule
and lessons are learned in paradox school.

 

 

 

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contemporary sonnet

Sonnet
Sonnets are formal poems and consist of 14 lines (3 quatrains and a couplet) , traditionally written in iambic pentameter - that is, in lines ten syllables long, with accents falling on every second syllable.
source: shadowpoetry.com

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  • Ellis gold member
    January 4, 2008
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    Delightful


  • cricketjeff gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    Congratulations on receiving a trophy in "TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME! - Part 5 Fantasy". In a contest of this standard all prizewinners should be very proud of their poems, Well done.
    Jeff and Sue


  • cricketjeff gold member
    January 3, 2008
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    Are you determined to get all my points? How about entering something badly spelt with horribly forced rhymes and no flow next time. I suppose it will be the same old boring near perfection though. All I can really say here is we both slightly preferred the retourne although that had two things we didn't like in whereas this had none.
    Wonderful please do keep entering the later rounds and start planning a great new write or two for the finale.


  • jamiedoring
    December 20, 2007

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    Wow, your writes are always so amazing...I have to admit I have read alot by you and I never comment as I feel I have so little to offer. And after reading your words.....Great, excellent, awesome, superb, fantastic....just seem so BLAH compared to what I really want to say, lol. Its funny how reading your poetry can give me writers block as far as commenting. Well, now I am just rambling on and on, lol...I just wanted to let you know I thorougly enjoy your work and I have been inspired to poke around and try experimenting with some forms and different styles. I guess I could have just said "Great poem". lol


    • Amera gold member
      December 20, 2007
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      What a wonderful comment! You made my day! Please don't ever refrain from commenting. We all are learning here and need the encouragement. Thank you so much!


  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    July 3, 2007

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    Wow

    This is really brilliant rhyme i must say for one.. I think it is a very good poem and a perfect idea of what you think heaven will be like that is what i wanted.. good luck ur the first to make it in the finalists from the option


  • Swan song gold member
    June 30, 2007

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    I love the firsdt two lines they are very enticing. Overall this is a very cool poem. I also liked the first two lines of the second stanza. As always Amera you are an inspiration!


  • maa gold member
    June 29, 2007

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    I love paradox-school
    a truly enchanting poem ...
    vivid and colorful imagery and a happy, light-hearted atmosphere ...
    I am sure if we create such places in our minds, they will manifest before us in matter ...

    much love,

    maa


  • ellipsist
    June 29, 2007

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    nicely done... I am

    rather fond of the imaginative world that you've portrayed in this piece... it sounds so charming and inviting and welcoming... this piece contains such lovely descriptions... very creative...


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    Dollface, this has to be the best sonnet I have ever read.. You provided exquisite imagery, felt like I was being sweapt away into another realm of mystery, fantasy, intrigue...makes me want to go there NOW! The picture is gorgeous, love how you displayed me with the clouds, you were right when you said that would make a beautiful picture the sonnet is just impeccable..well done...


    • Amera gold member
      June 28, 2007
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      Oh Julez, I was hoping you'd like this as you were so kind as to let me use your picture. You are so photogenic. I love you.

      Amera $hearts;


  • PoetsAngel
    June 28, 2007

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    Oh this is just beautiful, you have painted a picture of pure bliss...this would be a truly wonderful place to live. Awsome

    Cathy
    xxxxx


  • Bazza
    June 28, 2007

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    Beautifully written.

    It is so nice to dream and fantasize and you have been able to take us on your journey to share it with us .. beautifully concievd, written and presented.

    • Amera gold member
      June 28, 2007
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      Bazza

      Thank you for the comment and joining me in my world.

      Love,
      Amera ♥


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 28, 2007

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    Amera...I can only go so long without my "Amera-Fix" before I begin to shake...and oooooh, once I read this
    I felt like I was floating again. You are exceptional
    in every way, my friend, and you inspire me to write
    better. I am going to try and write a sonnet...(taking
    a huge breath) Wish me luck...

    Love, Lane


    • Amera gold member
      June 28, 2007
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      Lane

      I thought you were mad at me and when I asked you and you didn't answer, I was sure of it. Seeing you here lifted my spitit so much. Thank you for the comment and joining me in my world.

      Love,
      Amera ♥


  • Cant-touch-this
    June 28, 2007

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    What a lovely poem you have penned if only there were a place so grand...A place where laughter is the only ruleThank you so much for sharing


    • Amera gold member
      June 28, 2007
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      Cant-touch-this

      Thank you so much for the comment and the "bunnies" I met you the other day and I'm glad I did.

      Love,
      Amera ♥


  • JohnnyD gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    Amera, well damn, the chick in the picture is warping my mind right now,nice form...oh same of the poem by the way



    Dad


  • Desire gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    Wow!!

    I swear You can do these with Your eyes closed
    Form Queen
    Loved this and what a piece You have penned!
    Beautiful presentation-
    Gosh You make the Sonnet look so easy
    Wow!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PerVirtuous
    June 27, 2007

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    Sign me up. How much does it cost? Can I get a scholarship? I love this, and I'm not the least bit bias. Three bunnies!! You have mastered the sonnet!!


  • Hetha gold member
    June 27, 2007

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    Nicely imaginative piece, with lovely form and rhyme. I like the pic too, that was a nice touch! One would be hard pressed to find such a place in reality, but in fantasy, one can only imagine the possibilities.


  • RedAquarius
    June 27, 2007

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    Where do you get all these lovely pictues!? This is a smooth, lovely sonnet. I like the idea of Amera Isle, where everyone rhymes and for some reason, I hear harps in the wind. A great pick me up for my dull work-day afternoon

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