I don't know what to say
I don't know what to think
I hardly even know myself
I'm headed towards the brink
I cry when I'm awake
I'm dead while I'm asleep
My body lies numb on the floor
Your secrets it will keep
Spinning from this crazy world
Looking for someone to understand
Your wounded little angel
Found you and your strong hands
I need your help to fly away
But into the darkness I fell
No one's here to save me now
Stuck in this life-less hell
I guess your love didn't mean anything
Or get me out of this place
But still everytime I close my eyes
I see your beautiful face
Author notes
Idk.. just came out one night... Title is in progress...
Please tell me what you think
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Very good write. Thanks for sharing it with everyone.
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this is amazing! i wish i could write like this!
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wow relly good,ur a great writter,, and i really like the whole emo section on your page, its great.
About a dirty pretty is not just over puncutation, its taking a subject, that is so called "dirty" like emo, suicide, hate,, stuff like that and making it look or seem pritty...
it just comes to me,, i dont know what it is or why,, but i love them,, there just so great and there fun to read, so give it a try,, and let me check them out
good luck kyadee
if u have any more questions or want an dea r help let me know -
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THIS WAS STRAIGHT UP INSANE CRAZY! and absoluty great. i could relate to this 110%. i hope everything worked out. And i also think you have a great title too. [officaly speechless too] -
this is awsome ya yayaya good job
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at this moment in time i can relate so much to this poem especially the line
"I guess your love didn't mean anything"
this is a really great write!!
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