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have you ever noticed how smoke
when inhaled
then exhaled
is different from the one just escaping the cigarette ?
it somehow seems less colorfull
more grey
the bluish tone of it just disappears...
it is as if your lungs have trapped it
and only the bitter,colder taint was allowed to fill the air

so ?

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  • O b l i v i o n
    June 29, 2007

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    sooooo! i think tefy said wut i wanted to say... human do that.. we do consume the best things of everything.. of the air.. of the earth.. of the pple we love.. of anythin we put our hands on..

    amazing insight to things.. u eternal deep thinker u..

    great to "read" u as always!!
    mwaah


  • XFaLLen-StarX
    June 28, 2007

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    a cig, as it burns, always seemed to me as life itself .. we inhale wut we get best of it, nd exhale wut we wanna let go ..
    but wut remains in our lungs is to remind us that nuthin can totally fade away .. nd the worst of experiences will always live in us, yet the feel of its gr8ness will remain there forever more ..


  • less than a poet
    June 28, 2007

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    wow!! not fair i just sstopped smoking 2 mnths ago y u doing this to me u made me ache for a ciggy
    amazing as usual quote it all ur words r so deep and go str8 to d heart with all their simplicity thery r still complicated wow!!! is d word!!


  • Apsinthion
    June 28, 2007

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    "it is as if your lungs have trapped it
    and only the bitter,colder taint was allowed to fill the air"

    like everything else.. we only keep the best for ourselves somehow..

    its the simplest of thoughts -but yet not that simple- that go on inside ur head that just amaze me..


    ~rana~




  • LordSam
    June 27, 2007

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    so!!!!!!!!!!!!! i feel like i have to have a cig, u made me smoke without smoking. i mean is it a cure to stop smoking? 3indama touridou sigara al raja2 kira2at haza el machehad. yes i can call it ascene


  • Sadistic Monkeys
    June 27, 2007

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    *reaches for a cig n smokes*

    you know.. after reading this.. smoking is actually interesting..

    love the write..

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