The first time you appeared before my eyes
Your words left me breathless with a feeling so nice
Your voice and those brown eyes
Shakes my soul bit by bit and teach me to swim in the seas.
You've never hold my hands
But you've touched my soul,
Saying nothing your silence says all.
You can read me just looking at my face once
Only your tunes make my feet able to dance.
You can feel my pain within you
And you can make my old time new.
Your love becomes my pen when it does pain
Your smile brings with it rain.
Every part of you makes me love you again and again.
You touch me with your eyes in the crowd
And my heart races so loud.
The silence of my soul that wants to be heard
Is nothing but your love.
You breath my love to live here
Everyday you ask for me in your prayer.
Author notes
There's none like this in my life.But I always pray that when there will be someone in my life, he will be like this.
Please tell me what you think
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A lovely read dear...such a warm feel grows in soul afetr reading this...
Been a long time..Hope you are fine
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fantastic...dreamy..
ah, you wish for a fairytale...don't all of we poets...
"..Saying nothing, your silence says all.." Wonderful work...simple, sweet, loving...a lovely expression of universal longing.. (I just read the comments as I went to post mine..I see others like that line too..)
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Saying nothing your silence says all.
You touch me with your eyes in the crowd
And my heart races so loud.
Amazing feelings you have penned in this poem
a happy read. hope you get your prince charming like this. i liked the title, it has a fairy tale touch 
well done for writing so nicely..keep going on
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Thanks honey. I know you can feel this poem within and that's only because that's you(the mosr near person to my soul).Thanks for the encouragement.
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I liked your poem.
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Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it.
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I love how this encompasses not only many emotions and aspects of how love makes us feel, but so many physical images as well. For example: "Only your tunes make my feet able to dance." How lovely. And my favorite lines:"You touch me with your eyes in the crowd/ And my heart races so loud./ The silence of my soul that wants to be heard...." Thanks for the entry.
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Wow, I really like this poem. I know someone a bit like this, although he is not mine. But, I wish he would be. I felt your emotion in this poem, and I can relate. Great job and good luck in the contest!!
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