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Child

Teddy bear laughter soft squealing joy
In the heart of a child we find so much love
No hurt for those we despise they share
Unprovoked love and courtship of the superior kind

Come to a child today and see your future
That was the future you had until you disposed
Threw it away we did for what we have now
Why do we want the wrong why not the love

Knew better did we really know better
Yesterday we always smiled and laughed
Today we count our money and no hope
We wounded ourselves the day we grew up

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  • tomisb
    July 1, 2007
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    Thanks enjoyed this. Tight concise and clear.
    Love Tom B.


  • Arkbear gold member
    June 29, 2007
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    So very true ~

    Welcome to Allpoetry!

     

    I can tell you're gonna make a nitch for yourself here ~

     

    Bear ~


  • wolfspiritguide
    June 29, 2007
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    the message in this work is a beautiful one and something i think that all can relate to. i for one have taken a peause to take certain stock in my life and am very inspired by this write. i thank you so much for sharing this and i am prompted to use this poem as inspiration for one of my own for a contest i am in. thanks so much and keep up the great work.