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My Fault *cry*

He walks into my life
I knew he'd never leave
And oh
Our match was definitely from God
Made in heaven
Oh
It was perfect...

Until
I screwed up
And messed with a guy
Who was married himself
Now it's gone
Everything we once shared
Disappeared
Into thin air

Our love that could never break
Was now shattered
On the ground
It was over
Tears shed
Flooded my heart
And I faded away
Into nothing
Just like the love
We once shared.

Author notes

don't yell at me this isn't true. i just use this motif a lot.

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  • Sweetangelgrace silver member
    June 29, 2007

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    A vivid imagination, an excellent piece!
    it had anice flow and you did an exellent job. it was very touching and it comes across with a lot of feeling.
    Thanks for entering my contest!

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