Abidoodle Island is my own place
This Island will remain my space
My island would be so fun
With palm trees and oceans under the sun
The dolphins would swim near shore
And the view would never bore
The sand would be warm and the water too
With beautiful flowers and sticks of bamboo
Endagered animals would be safe here
They wouldn't have to live with pressure and fear
My friends and I wouldn't go to school
They think that'd be pretty cool
My family would help me get my food
Well, as long as they are in a good mood
Abidoodle Island would be all I dreamed
While I sit on the beach as the sunshine gleamed
A contest entry
- Create you're own island, animal or ideal heaven (multi round) by xXGoddessofPainXx.
600 points, ended July 5, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hey u got to spell check u missed out a few words..
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Wow
This is a very nice idea.. Different and cute.. I lyk that you have used rhyme so it's very happening.. Also a very happy and bright back ground.. Thank you for enterin i will get back to you
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