Chirping busily
anticipating
Mother's return,
morning's provision--
breakfast
of worm
Author notes
PROMPT: CHICKADEE
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest Quickie Pay It Forward 10 x 10 x 10 by maa by maa.
543 points, ended June 27, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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cute indeed
if it was longer it would have spoiled it. and the page is just what the poem needs. feels like spring although it's winter in my country. Mada -
cute
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short but so sweet
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hahaha...so nice; very short and effective. Great thoughts here and I giggled thinking of this scene. What a joyful feeling here.
AsIThink...
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awwww, congrats on the silver trophy ttc!!!! you deserved it!!!
-slick99
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Yummy, nothing like a freash worm..yum, yum!
No, I'm not serious, or am I? LOL..
Thanks for sharing, great job!
Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Wonderful
Great write based on the prompt. And many congrats on the silver.
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gives the reader a vivid scene and lends a maternal theme to the prompt....nice!
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so lively and cute ...
I love chickadees - have rescued several of them - one of them is right outside in the lime-tree, chirping to me, and me responding ...
thank you for this sweet poem ...
maa
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a real story here in so few words, very well done...PK
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nice, and lets one see the baby birds hunger.
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Excellent Piece
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Prompt: CHICKADEE !!!
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