Is freedom really free?
Is love really love?
Is the truth really the truth?
We must be free they say, and yet we must have laws
We must be in love they say, and yet we hate
We must tell the truth they say, and yet we lie.
Is freedom really free?
Is love really love?
Is the truth really the truth?
Author notes
I know this is kinda weird...but hey! I have writers block...I'm just trying to write SOMETHING!!!
A contest entry
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There are two kinds of writers. Ones who have had writer's block and ones that are going to get it. So don't feel alone in that boat. Don't you just love the duality of life?
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.
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we arnt as free as we like to think and nothing is fair..freedom and fairness are all man made institutions ,but alas fail dismally . well written ..peter
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To be in love, you feel it, your heart tells you so.
to be free, you only need to be able to do what you want, when and where. Laws are only there to be broken in the right place, and to keep everything else in line.
truth is only understood by those who believe it to be. White lies can be a godsend at times, whereas 'full on' lies can decieve the recipient to a degree no one will realise.
writers block, nah, just a clever mind spoken in short verse, well done. Very thought provoking piece.
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oookkkaaayy...briliant writers block
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brilliant
it has opened my eyes for sure, it is not short it cant be it has so much deep meaning it can make you think for hours on an end, its really good...these thoughts are very good! i loved it!
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