new-born rivers (haiku)

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• Quickie...pay it forward by kaibab. 300 points, ended June 27, 2007, 4 entries
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  leander
  December 4, 2007
  
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  I think you have quite a good way with this form dear maa. you definately have two images that set the moment in paint, and then the AHA moment... well done!
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  Pollycheck
  December 4, 2007
  
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  new-born rivers
  cascading towards the valley -
  snowmelt
  
  Thank you for entering my ku contest. This haiku does a very good job of describing the results of a large rain storm.
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  Malabu
  June 29, 2007
  
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  yep...love this one too

  and a goldie goes with it....beautiful thoughts come to mind reading this...a mountainous region and wilderness settles supple thoughts to rivers edges....great job...

  
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  Hetha
  June 27, 2007
  
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  I agree with PK's comment. This is full of imagery and beauty! Well done and congrats on the gold!

  
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  Peteskid
  June 27, 2007
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  beautiful, a picture, action, wonderful use of the prompt...PK

  
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  kaibab
  June 27, 2007
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  As such a graceful wave of word...just beautiful

  
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  crimsondew
  June 27, 2007
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  pretty description here. goodluck..
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  azure85
  June 27, 2007
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  This is so beautiful!!
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  countrybabe
  June 27, 2007
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  Beautiful

  
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  kaibab
  June 27, 2007
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  prompt...snowmelt